Matt Bellamy

Again, well-written. Again, not the most original idea, but still. I particularly like your imagery in the second-to-last stanza. Keep writing.

This is by no means an original idea, it is rather cliché, and you should experiment with your writing style to make it your own. That's not to say that ...

I liked this. I liked the structure, it kept in line with the format, and wasn't at all forced. A well-written piece.

This has a lot of potential. Let's go through it. he fell down she offered a hand he hit the ground she helped him stand I liked this stanza - ...

I find the concept somewhat cliché and overdone. The ending came suddenly and unexpectedly, and disappointed me a little because this kind of poem has been done so many times. ...

April? I'm beginning to think people are afraid of critiquing long poems ;) As am I *blush* You have a very distinct style, which I like. Your imagery is good ...

This was well written. However, I am guessing the reason why it has yet to be critiqued is that it is rather long, and a little difficult to "get". I ...

*Gasp* 9th of May? Why hasn't this been critiqued? Shame on you, YWS! Anyway, I liked this. It flowed nicely, the rhythm is good, and I like the concept. However: ...

wow, I adore this. Great concept, great tone, well written. Just a few suggestions: This is a letter to my father, A letter to my mother. This a letter to ...

I love this concept, and I think the repetition of questions works really well. The only thing I would say is that the last couple of lines in each stanza ...

I generally don't like second person narrative very much, and find it difficult to write, but this wasn't too bad. "Drown in your own sorrows" seems a little cliché/overused...but then, ...

You mean you can just see the edges because your posts are in the way? Someone correct me if I'm wrong, but I'm not sure that can be changed. Also ...

A train of bikers moved slowly along a deserted path. They continued doggedly on even though their limbs were exhausted and they were all panting half-heartedly. All of them have ...

Erm, wow. That was interesting. I can't critique it much because it was just so bizarre. But I think I liked it. It was a bit gross, but at least ...

Ooh. I've not heard of this kind of poem before, which makes it difficult to critique, since I don't have past experience with them to compare it to. I will ...